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It's pretty good 
It keeps you interested on what is going on with the characters, and the descriptions are very good too.
One suggestion though, I think panel 5.1 could work better as closure for page 4. That way you could have one "turning of a page" before the setting changes.
It keeps you interested on what is going on with the characters, and the descriptions are very good too.One suggestion though, I think panel 5.1 could work better as closure for page 4. That way you could have one "turning of a page" before the setting changes.