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>Page one six Panels. Three caption boxes.

Panel one- six is standing atop a rooftop with guns pointed at him.  This is a close-up view with only the Barrel of guns being shown.  The scene is at night with a half moon over head.

Caption:   Have you ever heard the phrase curiosity killed the cat?

Panel two- Six  gives the finger.  

Caption: you see Six is a mysterious vigilante whom I would give my kidney to done a exclusive interview for.

Panel three- jumps off the building with the guns firing at him.

Caption two:  if you haven’t guess yet this is the beginning of how I let my curiosity get me in trouble.   

Panel four -he turns and tosses out three orbs in front

Panel five- the orbs form a triangle with a portal shaped triangle in the center.

Panel six- Six falls through the portal and disappears.

Caption: In this case it’s attracted to Six.

Caption: when  

Page two.

Panel one:  person stands on a bridge.  This is a far view shot not seeing much detail on the woman.

Caption:  This attraction soon became an obsession.  

Panel two a man walks up to the woman and hands her a large envelope.  The woman wearing a trench coat jacket, hat and boots looks down over

Caption: You see obsession is a bad thing kiddes.  It makes you trust the devil.

Panel three: the woman is facing the other way reading the envelope.  The man points a gun at her head.

Panel four is completely black with the words Bam with a word effect.

Caption: and we all know that trusting the devil gets you burned every time.  The good news is I’m not dead.

Page Three.  One panel.

Panel one:  cat scratch is laying on top a pile of bodies.

Caption: the bad news is I’m in some deep shit.

Page four:  four panels.

Panel  one shows Pez looking down at cat scratch face.  Note this is a first person view.

<Cat scratch:</b>  What the hell?  What kind of freaky looking cat are you?

Panel two. Same shot but this time show a message above Pez’s head.  The message should reads “If I were you I would move now.  Roll to your right now”

Panel three.  Show Cat scratch rolling to her right avoiding a stream of flame coming at her.

Panel four.  Show the character the disposal standing with her arms pointing forward..  show cat scratch head in the bottom of the panel from the back side.  

Cat scratch:  WOAH.

Disposal: hey kitten, glad to see I got your attention.  

Page 5: six panels.

Panel one: close up on Disposal’s helmet.

Disposal: I want to have a chat with you cat scratch.

Panel two:  Cat scratch is standing on her feet.  Pez is to her right.

Disposal: you’re going to kill me right here, right now.

Cat scratch:  Say what?

Panel  three show disposal raising her arms up at cat scratch.

Disposal: shut up and kill me you stupid pussy cat.

Panel four: show cat scratch leaping out of the way.

Cat scratch: owowoowowowo.  What the hell?

Panel five: shoe cat scratch looking at Pez on the floor.

Cat scratch: got any ideas you strange sign broadcasting cat.

Panel six : close up of pez with a message appearing on top of her head.  The message read: “Mel, use your senses for once in your life.”
:) I'm trying to get into writing in panels so if you have any help crits please share'em.

quick note, i haven't decided what the Disposal will look like yet or their gender.

cat scratch: [link] by :iconryuuen: [link] by :iconzet:

also if anyoen wants to draw this out for practice please let me know.
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ZipDraw's avatar
ok i dont wanna sound like an ass (again) but i think its all good cept one thing... page descriptions... more scenery discriptions and what camera angle (camera angle optional), and more of what emotion you want conveyed.