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this another wip of the Cat scratch intro i'm working on.
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Reads rough,very rough. You as the reader really can't figure out whats going on. But perhaps this is because there are no images to go off? You seem to be thrown right in, no work up to things or a build up. It leaves me a bit confused. You've gotten tons better though. The typo's are still there, but not as badly as they used to be.