I like the pacing and the imagery. Please submit more to this contest... I'm beginning to look like an asshole uploading as many as I am...
lol, thanks. btw, I'll be watching your submissions. Need something to read, lol.
I read it. it's not bad. but it is waaay too much for 2 pages. I think it's too much for a single scene, myself. You've got lines in there that give away just way too much. There's no journey for the photographer as to finding out that she's not human. (that part of the story could be a huge plot point.)
Good luck to you!