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This is my Entry to the DA comic team contest- Writers. [link] I'm sure most of you know who Bloodwork is by now.

Bloodwork: [link]

the enemies are three Guys wear black outfits from head to toe and Motorcycle helmets. yeah Yeah I know.
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fear-is-spreading Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008  Professional General Artist
I like the pacing and the imagery. Please submit more to this contest... I'm beginning to look like an asshole uploading as many as I am...

please?

PLEASE!!

lol
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PSOWILL Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
:lol: sure deal.
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fear-is-spreading Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008  Professional General Artist
lol, thanks. btw, I'll be watching your submissions. Need something to read, lol.
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PSOWILL Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
:blush thanks...:lol: I just submitted something else. ^^; this is just too big for 2 pages [link]
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fear-is-spreading Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008  Professional General Artist
I read it. it's not bad. but it is waaay too much for 2 pages. I think it's too much for a single scene, myself. You've got lines in there that give away just way too much. There's no journey for the photographer as to finding out that she's not human. (that part of the story could be a huge plot point.)
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PSOWILL Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
:) just edited it a bit.
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p-sanchez Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
Good luck to you!
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PSOWILL Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
:ahoy: thanks. I might edit this script a bit more.
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